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Literature
When I saw her...
I'm seeing right through you,
like a crepuscular ray,
trying to find you was like,
a needle in the hay,
it took so long and many a day,
but finally i found you,
my one true love.
But you never loved me,
and that's plain to see,
that my pain never fell on you,
like the roaring of a thousand winds,
and a thousand lightning strikes,
here to smite me down,
back to the town:
where I met you.
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Literature
Dice
Rolling the dice I never thought twice,
about what you and I could have been:
so much more than friends.
Rolling around in your dad's Benz
talking about all the things we should have been.
It makes me wonder:
 you had the choice of all these men,
and you chose that silly boy.
I guess I was right to roll the dice,
just one last time,
on you.
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Literature
Classroom Vents #6
Liters to Meters,
with these future wife beaters and cheaters,
drop a rhyme like these punks on a dime,
hear that chime?
Next block.
(Finally man can't wait to leave...)
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Literature
Classroom Vents #5 (Bubble Gum)
Springy drip-drop,
quietly pip-pop,
juices going slish-slosh,
I might just get caught:
Oops.
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Classroom Vents #4 :icontherealchilledzuko:TheRealChilledZuko 0 0
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Classroom Vents #3 :icontherealchilledzuko:TheRealChilledZuko 0 0
Literature
Classroom Rants #2
They told me to cool off, slow down,
I didn't make a sound:
cold shoulder.
Cause' I've been working such a fervor,
got me blazing like a fever,
gonna need something thicker than a cleaver:
to cut this concentration.
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Classroom rants #1 :icontherealchilledzuko:TheRealChilledZuko 0 0
Literature
Wake up (Part 2)
Wake up, wake up!
Feel the ocean breeze urging you on.
It is the dawn of a new day,
Make no delay in your efforts!
There's not a moment to waste,
You won't get another one.
Another moment right here,
In this place with these people.
The conditions are right,
So light the fire.
Gather your friends,
And strangers alike,
Because for just once in your life,
You will live, if only for a night.
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Literature
Wake up (Part 1)
Wake up, Wake up!
The world is watching,
And waiting to see all that you can bring.
You can only bring so much,
The world is kind and understanding.
But alas- it is not enough,
The world is so cruel and unforgiving.
You changed the world,
And it saw you.
But the world does not care so much,
Even if you try your hardest to help.
To the world: you're nothing more than kelp,
Or a tree or some beast of another world.
But as for me: if that is all you can be-
Well my friend, that's good enough for me.
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Literature
Prom Poem
Smiling and shaking:
Like the whole world is quaking,
From the question you’re dying to know,
And it just might kill you,
From exciting “YES!”
To the deadly “no…”
That’s exactly what I need to know.
No matter rain nor snow,
Or if anyone else will show,
Would you go to prom with me?
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Literature
Bagel Poem
I thought I’d have a poptart but I was out,
So I had a bagel,
Man I was boutta flip a table,
Cause my toaster is like a snail,
This close to derail-ing,
Until I heard the toaster pop like:
“Ding ding da da ding”
Throw on some butter and honey for the bling
And it makes me sing like
“mmmmmmmmmmmmm”
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Literature
Trial Poem (Wonder)
( I am) Sitting here staring at my screen
Wondering:
How can I spice up their day like a tangerine
If I don’t spend my days mingling
Pestering
Them about all they do and think?
How can I give them
All they want
And cannot give themselves?
But still stay true to myself
My beliefs
And my wonders.
 
It’s a wonder at all
That they came here
To grace me:
A simple kid
With simple dreams;
One last chance
To sing and be me
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I'm seeing right through you,

like a crepuscular ray,

trying to find you was like,

a needle in the hay,

it took so long and many a day,

but finally i found you,

my one true love.

But you never loved me,

and that's plain to see,

that my pain never fell on you,

like the roaring of a thousand winds,

and a thousand lightning strikes,

here to smite me down,

back to the town:

where I met you.
When I saw her...
It's been awhile since I've felt truely loved. This is how I feel a majority of the time when I see someone I've once loved, but they never returned it.
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Rolling the dice I never thought twice,

about what you and I could have been:

so much more than friends.

Rolling around in your dad's Benz

talking about all the things we should have been.

It makes me wonder:

 you had the choice of all these men,

and you chose that silly boy.

I guess I was right to roll the dice,

just one last time,

on you.
Dice
I'm not sure I was just chilling and I thought of a rhyme and this is what came out.
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Woop woop! What should I do for my break?
Liters to Meters,

with these future wife beaters and cheaters,

drop a rhyme like these punks on a dime,

hear that chime?

Next block.

(Finally man can't wait to leave...)
Classroom Vents #6
I really don't like the kids i'm in my chemestry class with...
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Springy drip-drop,

quietly pip-pop,

juices going slish-slosh,

I might just get caught:

Oops.
Classroom Vents #5 (Bubble Gum)
I was chewing gum and got caught, was kinda funny so I figured I'd put it in a lighter perspective.
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TheRealChilledZuko
Jax
United States
Hello everyone! Thanks for stopping by my profile. I'm just a silly boy writing silly poems and telling stories. Don't hesitate to checkout my Youtube channel or add me on Steam.

Age:17
Sex: Male
Gender ID: Straight
Ethnicity: White

Other: I enjoy playing video games, playing Tenor Sax, reading/writing, and being a goof.
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RandomFallingCats Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello!
Welcome to DeviantArt! Hope you have a good experience here!
Have a good day!
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SsLovespandas1 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2017  Student Writer
Bunny Emoji-88 (Hello) [V5] 

Welcome to DeviantArt!

I Hope you Enjoy your time here

Anyways

Wiggly text - Bye Bye 
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TheRealChilledZuko Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017
Hello friend! Thank you, and everyone who's welcomed me back! I'm certainly looking forward to coming back to such a nice community.
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SsLovespandas1 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Student Writer
^^ You'er Welcome!
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Huntertje Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hello Jax boy, welcome to the da-family, and here a little welcome-present : huntertje.deviantart.com/art/F…
Enjoy here !!
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TheRealChilledZuko Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017
Hello and thank you! It feels great to be back. I love the intricacy you have on that piece.
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Vixenkiba Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi there, and welcome to DeviantArt! I hope you'll enjoy it here as much as I do :D If you ever happen to have any questions, feel free to ask me!
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TheRealChilledZuko Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017
Haha! Thanks a ton, but this is my second account. I don't remember a lot but I'll definitely hit you up if I have a question. Cheers~
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Vixenkiba Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome to your new account then, and yes, please do :D
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